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My Saving Grace by =RaveLegend:iconRaveLegend:

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©2009-2010 =RaveLegend
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CRITS PLEASE! :heart: And download for full view, because it is huge! :lol:

MOAR WINGS. *slapped* As much as I hate them, I draw them more.. strange, right? Aw well, this was another music-inspired piece. This time the song was "My Saving Grace" by Armor For sleep, (Again, thanks much to =ArthurRoyalKnight to sending them to me! >w< ) which is a really beautiful song, it was so inspiring and ffff. ;w; The line that made me draw wings (again. Haha) was "I thought you were an angel, I guess you were a vulture. Either way spread your wing and fly away." And that gave me the idea for the one white and one black wing, I really like it. :)

I also tried out some different coloring (Happy, KK? xD)! I tried to do something a little.. softer, yet still cell shading, so tell me what you think~ I especially love how I colored the eyes! x3 And I realize I didn't give James his bracelets, or put the DC sign on his shirt, but I thought that'd kinda take away from the picture's mood, so I just left them out. lol

James and art © :iconravelegend:

And I know I shouldn't be online right now, but I really wanted to finish and post this! xD; I probably won't be online past tomorrow till I'm home. lol

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=ArthurRoyalKnight Jun 22, 2009, 8:41:10 PM
I really think you deserve a feedback of this kind again so here I go:

When I saw the pic for the first time it remembered me to a true artist style, Idk how to exactly describe it... but something you can find in Art Gallery in a Exposition and know it was drawn by an Artist. So yea, I really loved the style, overall how James' face came up. :nod:

Besides of that, the concept, as I told you before, is pretty good itself, the song you used as a background reference was a great choice. You really knew how to put it on. :aww:

Talking about the technique, I like how the soft colouring came up, I think you should try this style more often, I really like it!

So the only advices I could give you are to the keep and eye on those hands and wings (I still even don't who to draw them correctly but I try my best ^^;) but I'm sure you'll improve on them very soon anyway. :peace:
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=ArthurRoyalKnight Jun 22, 2009, 7:13:59 PM
Wow! :wow:

Well, well, this came up simply amazing Lisa, I really loved the concept, very very nicely done! :dance: Overall due to the music behind this drawing I guess. :aww:

Anyway, you're really improving with those wings, I like them. =]

So yea, keep up the awesomesauce work and good to know you liked again the stuff I sent you, my pleasure! :huggle:

--
"Save me
Falling down
Angels of clarity
(I am done by society!)
Save me
Frozen inside
Angels of clarity
(I am done by society!)"

Angels of Clarity by Dead by April
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=RaveLegend Jun 22, 2009, 7:15:36 PM
Eeee, thankies, Arthur! >w< :glomp:

Yeah, I tried to make them less sharp and more rounded off. xD

And yus, I loved it! You're so sweet. ;3;

--
I'm David Schmitt in dA's Fearless Records Crew!
:iconarthurroyalknight:
=ArthurRoyalKnight Jun 22, 2009, 7:27:19 PM
You're very welcome Lisa! :iconglompage:

Haha, well, they came up more rounded and look better, I like all the feathers on it too. >83

Awwws! x333 I can't wait to share more music with you then. >w<

--
"Save me
Falling down
Angels of clarity
(I am done by society!)
Save me
Frozen inside
Angels of clarity
(I am done by society!)"

Angels of Clarity by Dead by April
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~Patch-ninja-wolf Jun 22, 2009, 7:07:38 PM
Hehe, this came out really good, Lisa, I like it. :D

James looks so freakin' innocent, and yet mysterious in this picture, all at the same time, >w<

Careful with the hands, though, they are quite tricky, too. Just saying :D

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Me: Action speak louder than words.
You: *gets out a megaphone* Well this..speaks louder, THAN ACTION!!!
:iconravelegend:
=RaveLegend Jun 22, 2009, 7:08:55 PM
Thank you! <33

And yeah, I know. XD; I haven't drawn hands in a while, so they could've been better. XD;

--
I'm David Schmitt in dA's Fearless Records Crew!
:iconpatch-ninja-wolf:
~Patch-ninja-wolf Jun 22, 2009, 7:09:59 PM
No problem.

I have a few hand pictures in my gallery in the 'tutorials' section, if you want to ref off of those. :)

--
Me: Action speak louder than words.
You: *gets out a megaphone* Well this..speaks louder, THAN ACTION!!!
:iconravelegend:
=RaveLegend Jun 22, 2009, 7:11:31 PM
Yeah, I have a few too. I just drew this while I was sitting on the couch. xD; I know they could've turned out better if I was in a mode, but I kind wasn't. lol ^^;

--
I'm David Schmitt in dA's Fearless Records Crew!
:iconpatch-ninja-wolf:
~Patch-ninja-wolf Jun 22, 2009, 7:13:57 PM
Well, yea.
I'm still getting crap on my sketches, and yea...its kind of taking long, since I haven't drawn people in awhile, now

--
Me: Action speak louder than words.
You: *gets out a megaphone* Well this..speaks louder, THAN ACTION!!!
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