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CRITS PLEASE!

I'm so obsessed with him. Someone please help. <3;

I sketched this a bit ago and decided to color it yesterday, didn't finish so I did today, and yay. :'D I got some awesome headphones, and I'm kinda obsessed with 'em, so I drew <human> James with them. C: AND DAMN, HE'S SO HOT. *killed*

Random background, just some music notes to kinda.. go along. I think the green one came out the best. xD So.. no crits containing to the background, please. It wasn't really tried on. XD; And I haven't done traditional coloring in a while, it seems like. Felt good. <3

James and art © :iconravelegend:

I think I'm improving on my humans~ Well.. at least James. :heart:

Critiques


:iconarthurroyalknight:
I think you really deserve a feedback of this kind for this artwork so here I go:

I can tell you've improved a lot with your humans. Srly! This came up very well, I like the body proportions and the stand, it could look kinda simple but it gives a nice touch to the concept of your drawing. :peace:

And talking about the concept, I really like due to it's about music and I love music! ~:heart: It's not the typical stand of "doing nothing" so it's good to know you're trying new stuff.

About your new colouring technique I can say it looks pretty good, I like the shadows and highlights, overall the way you coloured the clothes.

Keep up the good work Lisa, I can't wait to see more human drawings of you. :thumbsup:
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:iconpatch-ninja-wolf:
That is what I call awesomeness. :)
Good work

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:iconravelegend:
Thanks. <3

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:iconpatch-ninja-wolf:
No problemo, bud. :hug:

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Me: Action speak louder than words.
You: *gets out a megaphone* Well this..speaks louder, THAN ACTION!!!
:iconarthurroyalknight:
Very very nicely done Lisa! :aww: Nice drawing. :w00t:

I sent you a critique of course. :peace:

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Falling down
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Save me
Frozen inside
Angels of clarity
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Angels of Clarity by Dead by April
:iconravelegend:
Thank you. <3

Eeee, thankies! <333 :glomp:

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:iconarthurroyalknight:
No worries! X3 Keep doing these human drawings plz! |3

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Falling down
Angels of clarity
(I am done by society!)
Save me
Frozen inside
Angels of clarity
(I am done by society!)"


Angels of Clarity by Dead by April
:icondmdmal:
A fangirl of your own char? |D
Anywho, I say thumbs up and a job well done XD

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Yes.. I am. xD

Thank you. ;D

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:icondmdmal:
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no prob : D

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